Red Ashes

Hallo there! 'Tis me, Ash! Right, well I'll get right on it. :D Hi! This is the prologue to my book Lady Death. The idea came to me one night ...

Hello Fanpire (do I call you that?) Here goes. :D Well, I have my own way of critiquing (you have no idea how many times I've said this) so bear ...

Well, you've had all the comments on technicalities and such of poetry, so I, as a non poet, will comment on the feel and the concept of this piece without ...

Okay, so, I'll give this a go and be the first one, Yay! :D But, um, I just have to say that I have a unique critiquing style. My corrections ...

You be my first critique!!! Well, here goes... Chapter One: I Punch, You cry I like the title! :D I tightened my abdomen, gritted my teeth and stood my ground. ...